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July 21, 2005

Overtown

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Overtown, Miami

Overtown is usually empty in the late morning hours. By mid-afternoon, boys on bikes patrol the streets looking for cops and potential customers. Homeless men gather under the highway and consider their options. In the bushes, a pile of clothes turns over; a dog sniffs once and retreats slowly back to the cracked pavement.

Tinted windows slow. A woman with limbs like twigs comes to the window and whispers a word. Spinning rims flash gold. There is value on the outside. I don't know what lurks within.

Working men and women will return to their crumbling concrete blocks and try to keep their kids inside as the shadows get longer. A little girl clutches a bag of chips -- there is orange powder on her lips and her eyes are on those rims that twirl and seem to promise something pretty. The car has come to a stop at the corner. And men get out and argue.

Her hand reaches into the bag and digs for that last crunch. She hears her mom call, but why take her eyes off those spinning sparkles. Everything else is turning gray.

Posted by alexis at July 21, 2005 08:15 AM

Interesting, in a good way, that you often write your observations in the present tense. It reads like a novel.

Posted by: yp at July 21, 2005 10:33 AM


I LIKE IT, A NOVEL IN THE MAKING.

Posted by: peg at July 21, 2005 11:31 AM


very well written and the image (with no people) allows you to place the characters. what a fantastic, creepy place.

Posted by: jamie at July 21, 2005 04:27 PM


That picture tells a story.

Posted by: Donovan Phillips at July 24, 2005 05:00 PM